My first Motion Graphic{ I'm proud of it}

I finally got sometime for myself thank god. At the expensive of being yelled at and accused of sharking responsibilites. I finally had a chance to sit and composit and really work with some of my editing programs. This is what I've done. I've made a title sequence. Entitled combative...my new sampler will have an intense military feel to it. It will be released come December possible January. The sequence featers the title 3 layers of a gradiant ramp, black solid and composite layer, a Flourish, two arrows 2 texture backgrounds and various paint splatters to give it a weather hard grunge feeling to it. I'd like to know what you think. Yes that is the same font they used for indiana jones.